Survival

I did my speech on "How to Survive" and I shared some of my thoughts and ways on how to survive. My main points where the things, you should bring with you when going on an adventure, the steps you should follow through with when in a survival citation. I mentioned some skills every person should know. In my speech, the content is as good as I can make it, but others were really good. In my introduction i believe that it could have been more interesting, it also could have been introduced much better to the audience. Overall my introduction was written well and I believe I  said it well. When I got into my body paragraph, which is where I really got into it, I feel like I could have  done better. I feel as if the main points where clear enough. I feel as if the main points I did say could have been supported a little bit better. My body was a bit mixed up and could have been organized better. My topic was a little off for me, I feel as if I shouldn't have chosen it, because I feel like that was the one I had least experience with.I believe my main points could have been connected better and tied together to each other better. In my conclusion, I feel as if it was a little short. I think that it could have been more of a summary of my topic. One thing I feel like I did well was having a closing statement. I think my closing and opening statement was strong and useful. I think that if I was the listener, I would be motivated to learn how to survive.In my opinion the language was very well. I changed the tone of my voice a lot and I didn't sway a lot. In the delivery of my speech, I think I could have used a notecard, and studied it more as well as using it to reference more often.I didn't look at my note card and read off of it, there was a lot of eye contact with the others. I feel as if i spoke slowly and clearly and didn't mix up words. My hand motion was good, I didn't fidget with anything too much. I think the ending of my speech really got people thinking and got people to realise that if they were in danger, they would want to be the one to help out. In conclusion I believe I completed this task well. My topic was introduced and I did was was asked for. I think the audience was interested and they enjoyed hearing my speech. I think i did a good job in all and hope to better next time.