What i need to do

My TED talk at the moment isn't that great. I feel that the way it is set up makes it harder. My talk has many cool facts, but i think too many. In my opinion,my TED talk could be more interesting and a better one, is by spacing it out more. I think i should put more pictures into it and really show my topic and what i am trying to tell people. My TED talk at the moment is of the right length, i believe i have the correct amount of words. I believe i have the right amount of pictures, facts and everything, i just need to spend more time organizing it better and putting things where they need to be. This TED talk is about the lionfish, and how they are very beautiful, but yet are so deadly. That is my main point and i need to change the way my words are to actually show and tell people that they are dangerous. Another thing is to put non disgusting pictures of the power they have into my slide, because that could definitely put the audience off. I believe i could fix my structure, by pausing more and using hand motions. I need to remember to use a lot of eye contact, don't memorize everything, follow the pictures. I also need to remeber to speak loudly, clearly and speak to the audience. One other thing i need to not do is, figit with my key or any distractions.  This TED talk in my opinion, could be a very good, educating and interesting one, but i have to work really hard at getting my words, paragraphs, pictures and presentation together, if i want it to go the way i hope it too be. I feel that i still have a lot of work left to do, but i still have a lot of time.