GUidline for lionfish

Intro-  What are lionfish, fun facts about them

Body- why are they so deadly and killing our reefs

What to get out of it and concluison- they ar every opretty and taste so good, but are killing our reefs.

What do you want, BOOs or Claps?

In my opinion, a good TED Talk needs to have pictures. It needs to not be boring and make me fall asleep. It needs to not be long and unentertaining. A good ted talk needs to be short, meaningful and have lots of pictures, as well as making it interesting. In order for a TED Talk to be good in needs to be short. People listening will get bored and tired and start to loose track of what you are saying. They will loos their patience and start to get bored, and that is not what you want. A good TED talk needs to have pictures. It needs to have a lot of colorful pictures and have fun and entertaining things. People now a days have smaller attention spans and so we need to keep them interested in what we are trying to say. In order for a good TED talk the writer, needs to open with a bang and keep that bang going and end on a bang. Their goal is to encourage us to listen to what they have to say and in my opinion in order for them to do that, you need to make your presentation, fun,colorful, short and don't use big words. Some other key points are to move around the stage. You also need to not read from the podium. When you read from a piece of paper people see you as less interested and you are just reading it and you don't care about it. Another thing is to speak slowly and clearly, a lot of people get nervous and start to stutter or shake or speak fast and that causes them to mess up and people to loose interest. You want to speak slowly and clearly. Some other important things to make sure and double check when doing a TED talk is to have a backup plan or computer incase the first one dies. You would also want to have it in many locations, such as a flash drive, in your email, in your cloud and even burned to a CD if you have to. You always want to make sure you have a spare incase something goes wrong and double check your presentation, make sure it is all in order. Another thing is to practice your speech, practice your time, your breaths. Practice how you are going to say it and produce it, are you going to move around and use hand jesters. One last important thing is to make sure you have your microphone and make sure it is positioned just right for the audience can hear your voice. The last thing to having a good TED talk is to stay relax, do your best and have fun.

Links to Ted talk

https://www.ted.com/talks/cesar_harada_a_novel_idea_for_cleaning_up_oil_spills.  

https://www.ted.com/talks/hamish_jolly_a_shark_deterrent_wetsuit_and_it_s_not_what_you_think 

https://www.ted.com/talks/dame_ellen_macarthur_the_surprising_thing_i_learned_sailing_solo_around_the_world 

Topics for final

-why is the ocean so relaxing and listening to waves crash so relaxing. 

- lion fish-the invasive and killing the reefs. 

- why is it so beautiful when your on the top of a hill or mountains. 

Ted talk

shark deterrent wet suit- I find this interesting because all around the world, surfers and people are being attacked by sharks. if this works, this man will be very rich and famous.

the surprising thing i learned sailing solo around the world- i find this interesting because although i love 

sailing, i liked how he saw what was happening to oceans and reefs in different countries. he saw what was happening to this earth.

a novel idea to soak up the oil- this is interesting because, oil is killing everything. It is killing animals and reefs and it is killing peoples way of making an income, we need to stop oil pollution.

Survival

I did my speech on "How to Survive" and I shared some of my thoughts and ways on how to survive. My main points where the things, you should bring with you when going on an adventure, the steps you should follow through with when in a survival citation. I mentioned some skills every person should know. In my speech, the content is as good as I can make it, but others were really good. In my introduction i believe that it could have been more interesting, it also could have been introduced much better to the audience. Overall my introduction was written well and I believe I  said it well. When I got into my body paragraph, which is where I really got into it, I feel like I could have  done better. I feel as if the main points where clear enough. I feel as if the main points I did say could have been supported a little bit better. My body was a bit mixed up and could have been organized better. My topic was a little off for me, I feel as if I shouldn't have chosen it, because I feel like that was the one I had least experience with.I believe my main points could have been connected better and tied together to each other better. In my conclusion, I feel as if it was a little short. I think that it could have been more of a summary of my topic. One thing I feel like I did well was having a closing statement. I think my closing and opening statement was strong and useful. I think that if I was the listener, I would be motivated to learn how to survive.In my opinion the language was very well. I changed the tone of my voice a lot and I didn't sway a lot. In the delivery of my speech, I think I could have used a notecard, and studied it more as well as using it to reference more often.I didn't look at my note card and read off of it, there was a lot of eye contact with the others. I feel as if i spoke slowly and clearly and didn't mix up words. My hand motion was good, I didn't fidget with anything too much. I think the ending of my speech really got people thinking and got people to realise that if they were in danger, they would want to be the one to help out. In conclusion I believe I completed this task well. My topic was introduced and I did was was asked for. I think the audience was interested and they enjoyed hearing my speech. I think i did a good job in all and hope to better next time.

Survival Part 2

Do you want to be the one that lives when all others will die? In order for someone to survive, they need to relax. I have alot of experience in the outdoors and adventures. There are a few essential things i always have on me when I go camping or on adventures. I always bring a knife, a lighter, a sleeping back, rope and a bottled water. You need to learn to survive, it is a key thing to learn in life.

When surviving, the first thing you want to do is find a good source of water, and once you have done that you would need to find a camp site close to the water, find a place that is a good place to live. You then want to start building your place to sleep. In between, you would need to go find food, and fire wood. Trying not to waste your energy, you need to build your bed, build your fire and find your food. When surviving the key is to stay relaxed and never panic, if you panic you will use up twice as much energy as you need to. Some skills every human should know is, how to tie knots, how to build a fire without a lighter or gasoline and how to build things with little resources. In my opinion if you can do those three things very well, you would be able to survive. 

        Your life and others should be important to you, you want to be the person to help others when you are in a survival situation. You need to learn to survive, it is a key thing to learn in life. Dont forget, to bring these tools, learn these steps and dont panic.